you

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    you
    You are more than awoman…..,
    cause all I do see is a star from heaven
    thy walk is like a melodious orchestra,
    with every single second mine heart yearns for thy words,
    a smile will lite the room in darkness,
    a touch from the tells a thousand and one stories of your affections,
    a kiss from thy lips is filled with poisons of passion and desires
    from it a thousand arrows do piece mind mind with fireworks
    You are that wish by mine side ,
    without thee mine heart do feel sad
    and mine mind is lost in your disappearance

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    mbui commented on you

    08-11-2009

    i love your words, they truely describe a woman true beauty.
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    magati

    08/12/2009

    thanks alot.....thats why they are the ones called the lord called BLESSED....

    candysears commented on you

    06-18-2009

    Beautiful write.. Make me want to fall in love all over again..Love it!! God Bless & Much Love My Friend In Poetry!!
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    magati

    06/19/2009

    thanks...it is nice to know afew words could rise love again....

    Barbs commented on you

    04-24-2009

    nice words Magati for a woman`s ears.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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