DEATH OF A LOVE

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    when love itself does final leave u then what else is there

    DEATH OF A LOVE

    DEATH OF A LOVE

     

    Songs- that love known no fear stream through the air ,

    Do they know the Orb has prickly needles!

    Thy love-face shined like the moon on cloudless nite.

     

    Thy eyes were the stars the heavenly  daughters ,

    Thy voice like the rarest tunes, touching every hearth and soul,

    Thy breast full and pointed like the tip of a thorn,

    As thee pass by – beautiful tunes did follow hinder

    Thy swinging hips moved the crowd – and silenced the nite making the heavens even listen and cry out thy noun-

    “Love, oh love”

    And when thee start to sing new tunes…..tunes of freedom of our souls-affections…

    All were spellbound to thy enchanting.

     

    But now….look at thee….look at thy face has wrinkled with years of loneliness and greed to have it all….,

    Loneliness has thy splendor diminished and dug trenches on thee…

    Greed stole thy eyes sparkles and slacken thy beautiful  firm breast oh! Old thee look now without passion within…..

    Oh love…thee have died away from within-out.

     

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    Chi commented on DEATH OF A LOVE

    12-04-2012

    . LOVE IS.....By:Chi Adams love is more vase then the grasp of all earths land... standing deeper then the ocean blues smallest grain of sand, stretching further then the eye can ever possibly see, with roots older then time itself can hope be......... the only substance that can not be packaged, marketed or sold for mere money, silver nor gold...none duplicatable.....and highly debatable... It will always be free though it cages many humans, with its lure of excite that leads to fornication and mortal sin......Trapping there hearts in a maze whorl winds, then kicking then out the back door and through the front door to start all over again......the strongest force in the universe, one man calls it a blessing and to another..... a curse. It can create multiples of multiples of in rapid multiplies..... giving you the strength to live again or the will to lay down and die, it is here to stay and will always be.....calling us by name through the whisper of the wind between the trees.... a most powerful energy source that create something out of nothing and yet bring a grown man to his knees, begging please! please! please.....a vital key to the existence of all..... A vital long standing anti matter of energy that touches the lives of the young ,old, big and small.... that can collectively produce matter in all forms......it can calm your inner seas or rage you in a violent storms...so be careful with this substance for it comes from the ancient of old..... for it can make you a poor man yet.....its worth its wait in gold..... I...... Chi Poetry

    magati

    12/05/2012

    Girl, first where have u lost urself to, i have missed you alot...even called ur last number and was told u moved. anyway its with great pleasure and relief to hear from you my dearest, i hope you hvent forgetten our vows.....:D..........as for you poem thats wonderful words as always from such a beautifull heart and mind......am loving it and will be carefull with the it........much love.....(check me on FB- magati nyamweya).....god bless...

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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