You say What?

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    You say What?

    You say, "you love me."
    But you really don't.
    You said, "we can grow together."
    And you knew we really won't.
    So if you doubted my love,
    Why wouldn't you stop giving me hugs, kisses, and things like this?
    Keeping me tangled up and my mind in a twist.
    I guess maybe to hide the love that no longer exist.

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    Gertrude commented on You say What?

    06-11-2009

    Short, but very powerful! The reader can relate to this in so many different levels. I really like your style. Straight to the point.

    NayInLove commented on You say What?

    03-02-2009

    short and sweet nice :)

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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