Day Dreaming

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    Day Dreaming

     Day dreaming of you.
    Who are you?
    I see you everywhere,
    and i don't know what to do.
    When i day dream,
    I talk to you.
    But when i don't
    The talking is hard to do.
    You are so amazing,
    and I'm into you.
    There are things i want to say,
    But they can't get through
    I see you everywhere.
    I'm day dreaming of you.

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    Swann commented on Day Dreaming

    06-14-2009

    I like the feel of this poem, and it easily relatable. I have felt this way before about a girl. Really good job capturing being loss in thought about someone.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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