You Said

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You Said

You said you'll never leave my side ,
until the day that I die .
You said that life wouldn't be easy ,
just to keep my head up and be breezy .
You said that love lasts forever ,
but to say never means never .
You said that only God knows when ,
until he knocked on your door and said "Come in"
You said you'll be a beautiful angel , wings long and white
and to keep my head up and smile bright .
You said to always keep you in my memory ,
until i come and be God's special delievery .
You said...

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Beautiful1974 commented on You Said

07-14-2009

Great expression and good flow especially for your age.

AshhCullen

07/18/2009

Thank you soo much, yeah i get that alot. People couldn't believe i'm this young to write poetry like i do. Thanks again:)

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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