You Killed Me

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    You Killed Me

    I love you so,
    i'm devoted to you,
    i only wish,
    that you were too.
    You ripped my heart and smushed it into a pile of mush,
    and then you dragged me to a cliff and gave me quite a push,
    i died while you were still alive and watched you from above,
    you didn't even notice when i gave you all my love.
    I hope that you are happy now and living to the fullest,
    i only wish that the scar you left, wasn't from a bullet.

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    Tino82 commented on You Killed Me

    09-14-2009

    not to bad,held my attention,sounds like there should have been some more thoe.

    Phoenix9 commented on You Killed Me

    01-01-2009

    interesting

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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