You Don't Love Me

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    You Don't Love Me
    My eyes are crying, and my heart feels like its dying. For the words you say tear the pieces of my heart away. You are here but so far gone, and now everything is going wrong. You can be so hurtful and cruel! Sometimes I just feel like a fool! But we've been together for so long, and my feelings have grown so strong. If only you knew how much I really do love you, then maybe you could love me too.

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    Starchild commented on You Don't Love Me

    03-22-2009

    Feelings does not have to be long. Short and to the point is the best way to express how one feel. Thanks for sharing.
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    nakedtruth43 commented on You Don't Love Me

    03-14-2009

    I liked that it was simple yet emotional. Nice.
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    Drivingczar commented on You Don't Love Me

    03-14-2009

    Maybe he doesn't know how to show it but certainly he feels your hurts!
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    caspiancri commented on You Don't Love Me

    03-14-2009

    heartful I felt your pain
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    mspoetris commented on You Don't Love Me

    03-14-2009

    Your pain is real. I liked it, but I would put more form in it. So hurtful,so cruel,here I am, playing the fool.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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