You and Me

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    You and Me

    I never thought we could be together
    then you asked to dance at the first dance.
    I thought you didn't like me because
    the person who said that was Lance.

    Hunter, your dirty-blond hair gets me hypnotized,
    I knew there was hope for us.
    What now, Lance?
    Hunter and I will sit next to each other on the bus.

    Your light blue eyes are like a never-ending sea,
    I love that about you.
    All I can say is I love us!
    But, I mostly love you.

    How can we be together?
    How can we be?
    I have never thought that this could be real.
    I can now see my future, you and me.

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    FadingFebruary commented on You and Me

    09-20-2010

    It's so childish and naive but it perfectly captures the feeling; and that is what poetry aims to acomplish. Well done!
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    poetryprincess commented on You and Me

    09-19-2010

    Hey great poem and it has feeling. I love you did.
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    soccerchick556 commented on You and Me

    09-19-2010

    after dirty-blond I forgot to put hair! sooooo read it with hair. k?
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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