You and I

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You and I

When things are changing all around us,
and things seem to move to fast.
we should stop and thank the lord,
that through him our love still lasts.
When you look to future changes,
or how the past used to be.
Don't forget to look beside you,
because that's where you'll find me.
Loving you with all my heart,
mind body and soul.
A  love that's sweeter than honey,
and far more precious than gold.
When two people love each other,
As much as you and I.
There's nothing anyone can say or do,
to make us think our loves a lie.
So i give my heart to you my love,
in hope that you will keep,
not just for now my love,
but forever until we both rest in peace.

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Worthless commented on You and I

01-21-2011

I do like the way you put that.. But it's hard to beleive men think like that, cuz in my experiences Men are Assholes..! Nice!

Writer1 commented on You and I

06-28-2009

I couldn't wish you more happiness...in your life...and in your writing about it! Truly...I don't mean to gush, but this is another winner for me!!

jaceD

06/29/2009

thank you for all your comments im new to this and maybe you can help me out with a few pointers. ill be sure to check your work out as well

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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You and I 2
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