Writing in the spirit

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    Writing in the spirit

    Look at the words written if you will,
    The speech of mankind on paper and twill.
    Representation is to identify who cries,
    For those who bare witness or those who have ties.

    We all have our pain and some have their sorrow,
    Others go through life like there is no tomarrow.
    What starts from the beginning will come to the end,
    Will it become an origianl or fade as a trend?

    From the Author's reality your subcomed to a dream,
    You will laugh or will cry from the visions of theme.
    But in the end it is all about the Preacher,
    And thanks to the Lord for being the teacher.

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    UnworthyFather commented on Writing in the spirit

    06-21-2009

    Aahhh... if our poems could but bring tears or laughter from others!!! Then we would know that we were 'successful'. Great poem. Thanks for sharing.

    soulwriter commented on Writing in the spirit

    05-25-2009

    Yes, writing is a gift and it takes special spirits to be willing to share their thoughts and feelings with others... well said. Write on! "And thanks to the Lord for being the teacher"

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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