il be your beacon

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    il be your beacon

    When you are sad.....I will dry your tears.
    When you are scared.....I will comfort your fears.
    When you are worried.....I will give you hope.
    When you are confused.....I will help you cope.
    And when you are lost.....And can't see the light,
    I shall be your beacon.....Shining ever so bright.

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    windsongs commented on il be your beacon

    02-06-2013

    i love this poem.........................................................
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    RonicaLeigh commented on il be your beacon

    09-15-2009

    I love this poem. It is well thought out and has true meaning. Keep them coming .
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    thejazzpoet commented on il be your beacon

    08-28-2009

    julez123.. This is a masterful piece of work. I'm deeply touched that one can offer another such comfort, encouragement, and hope. I feel the inspiration, sorrow and sincerity within your words. He who has ever toiled with despair; he who has ever felt alone and unloved; and he who has lost someone, and now is worried, confused or sadden... need only to read this poem to brighten their spirits. This verse opened and ended with purpose and clarity; it embraced the intangibles of friendship, and the humanity of caring. An excellent composition. thejazzpoet
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    UnworthyFather commented on il be your beacon

    06-10-2009

    The perfect description of my mother!!! Beautifully written, julez123. This could be a Hallmark Card!! Thank you for sharing with others.
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    soulwriter commented on il be your beacon

    05-25-2009

    What a great friend you must be, and a good mommy too, keep writing and creating - one can never express themselves enough, and when done in the right way it makes the world a better place.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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