Would You

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    Would You

    If I ask to be your teddy, would you stuff me with love?
    If i ask to be your friend ,would you say, "That can be"?
    If I ask to be your Mountain, will you put me above?
    If I ask to be your question, would you answer me?

    If I ask to be your pal, will you adore my laugh?
    If I ask to be your money, will you not use me and keep me safe?
    If I ask to be your footsteps, would you open my path?
    If I ask to be your mass, would you give me weight?

    If I ask to be your lakes, would you be my world?
    If I ask to be your tree, would you be mother nature of my land?
    If I ask to be your man, would you be my girl?
    If I ask to be your husband, would you take my hand?

    If I ask to be your sky, would you judge my light or dark skin?
    If I ask to be your "someone" what would you do?
    What if I asked to be more to you other than a friend, or...
    If I ask you to be there for me. Well, would you?

    What would you do?

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    Mylyfe commented on Would You

    07-18-2009

    Nice...I like the depth..I like the realness of your ?'s.

    Nicko7 commented on Would You

    02-20-2009

    YEP EXCELLENT

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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