Continuem(Forgiveness)

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Continuem(Forgiveness)

Everynight I ask forgiveness
Hoping my days will last.
Living on the edge of temptness
With guilt to cloud my past.

By morning I'm glad to be away
From drifting a positive dream.
Risking then a new day of sin to take
And dream a new dream again.


As I go throughout my life
I'll Bless it as it lay.
Concealing hatred in menal ice
I hope the angels don't close my gates.

Rage angers throughout melting the mental ice
I'll continue to calm the day.
Then the pain escapes from being so tight
That the concealed hatred becomes the rage.


To continue to calm my nerves
It shall not become a buisness.
Forever, never, and once again a curse
This night I'll ask forgiveness.

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Grannyoakley commented on Continuem(Forgiveness)

05-18-2009

Great Poem. Have you read Charles Haanel's The Master Key System? It is heavy reading, but I am sure you can comprehend it. You read each 6 page chapter once a day for 7 days. It is mainly wht "The Secret" was derived from. Get it FREE on the internet. There are many today who claim The Master Key System is the greatest book ever written. It is simply one of the finest studies in personal power, metaphysics, and prosperity consciousness that exists. And The Master Key System was

Nicko7 commented on Continuem(Forgiveness)

02-20-2009

well written i can relate to this straight away great flow poignant and to the point BRILLIANT

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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