Without Sensation

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This poem is mostly how my relationship usually ends,,, misery.. so i write them down and soon my feelings would be written down, and when i read them, memories flows back to my thoughts.

Without Sensation

 

This picture that we have

Is nothing but a dream.

This thing that we call love

Is just small hope of gleam.

 

Your love is way too far to reach

No matter how much I run

Through the sunset beach

My heart could never fix what’s been done

 

So how can I move on?

                                When you still have my heart

That still shines just like the sun

When my heart fell apart

 

The castle in the stars

That you and I built

Is falling down as if it came from mars  

Each one collapsing into my heart

 

This destruction

Is like a reflection

From my dream

That turned heart dim

 

Where can I find this strength to move on?

To love yet again

Because my heart is stiff like a stone

That gives my heart pain

I feel all alone,

Because all I want to do

Is to be with you.

 

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The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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