With Every Letter

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    I actually wrote this as lyrics to a song.  The third verse here is my chorus.  I am presently in a lyric writing workshop and I hope to be working with a guitarist to write a melody.

    With Every Letter

    I’m making love to you

    With every letter that I write

    Although I can’t touch you

    You’re always in my sight

     

    As long as you’re away

    Babe, don’t worry ‘bout me

    It’s gonna be ok

    I’ll be waiting ‘til you’re free

     

    I’m making love to you

    With every stroke of my pen

    I’m making love to you

    Tonight I’ll do it again

     

    My days are like foreplay

    While thinking about you

    Pen and paper in mind

    Nighttime, where are you?

     

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    dahlusion commented on With Every Letter

    09-08-2009

    "My days are like foreplay While thinking about you" — this is one of the most poetic lines I have read in a long time.
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    ladynita

    09/09/2009

    Thank you. I'm a novice and appreciate your feedback.

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