Wispering Words

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This poem talks about two hearts arriving at the end of love

Wispering Words

Whispering words tell tales of lonely hearts

Enclosed by an emotion prison too scared to stand apart

Cold winds carry fantasies existing only in the mind

A jealous body searches for the same satisfaction but envy is its only find

Carry on sweet deceiving smile that hides my night

Light from whom the wondering moon illuminates my downfalls i curse its very site

As yellow and gold fire scortch the sky again i lift my weiry head my eyes begin to part

Another brightful day will end with whispering words from a lonely heart

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sexiy commented on Wispering Words

08-02-2009

I feel that what you wright is true and it hit home like you wrote if for me to read that's for sharing this so I could read it I loved it

vincent01

08/03/2009

It really means alot to me when someone can relate to a poem i write ...thanks

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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