Wish You were here

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  • Sadness

    Wish You were here
    As I walk
    I feel so alone
    Walking without a friend
    My beauty of the world
    Memories within me
    You left me here
    You gone so far away
    I try to understand
    All I think of is you
    I wish you were here
    To accompany me through this world
    To tell you my love is for you
    distance kept us apart
    leaving an emptiness within us
    becoming faithless in faith
    we move in our own ways
    never seeing the face of love
    wish you didnt part
    I wish you were here
    So I could hold you
    Kiss you
    And be with you
    To understand that God wanted us to be
    As we part and the world changes
    Your face
    Love
    Soul
    And memories are in my heart
    Ill never forget the Angel
    And love that is you
    I wish you were here
    So I could see you one last time
    I wish you were here

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    fallenlove commented on Wish You were here

    06-12-2009

    I like the poem, or the idea of it. i personally prefer poems that have rythym. but if thats not you, i still like it.
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    denythyself

    07/01/2009

    Thank you for the comment. I don't like to have rhythm in my work. I like to write from the heart and our emotions.

    ivecute77 commented on Wish You were here

    11-24-2008

    I think I'm becoming a fan of your work
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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