Winter Time

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    this one was written some time in 2003 also, but I was dumb and didn't put the month.  I don't know if it is even finished or not...   lol   any advice??

    Winter Time

     I watch the clouds
    Churning up a storm
    Laying down blankets of white.

    Looking behind me
    Rolling hills of green
    Where the sun is shinig bright.

    Rivers running strong
    Icy fingers stroking
    The large rocks down below.

    The birds are soaring
    High up in the sky,
    Looking just like a lost soul.

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    Crush commented on Winter Time

    07-13-2009

    winter is beautiful but i feel lost there. nice poem....thanks for sharing.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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