Wind's Whisper

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    Wind's Whisper
    through
    My ear bitten by
    The cold stings of silence sit
    Deep in melancholy
    My soul pantomimes

    To the awkward emptiness
    Inside and out
    A gust of wind breathes
    The fragrance of a voice
    Carried on a ballerina's pirouettes
    And an ice-faery's triple-lutzes
    Dizzy the message

    Chilled and shimmering
    Down a mountain's spine
    Across an ice-fogged mirror
    Tantalized by over-seeing eyes
    Still bright with curiosity

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    beautifuldeath commented on Wind's Whisper

    05-13-2009

    I love the word usage. excellent flow. brilliant write yet again. 10 from me.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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