Why Does The World Feel

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    Why Does The World Feel

    Why Does The World Feel like it's crashing in on you.
    One minute your happy then some one tares it apart.
    How does one make it end. Do you go tell a friend.

    Why Does The World Feel like it's crashing in on you.
    When your Heart feels like it has been ripped apart.
    How do you make that back to whole again. Do you go tell
    a friend. How is it you make it end.

    Why Does The World Feel like it's crashing in on you.
    What do you do to make it stop. What do you do to make
    it happy again. Life seems like it will never stop crashing in on you.
    Then it makes you really feel blue. Will there ever be anything true.

    Why Does The World Feel like it's crashing in on you.
    How is it that you make it end. That's when you look
    up above and ask god to take you away from it all.
    How he does that no one knows. You want to find peace
    like the Doves flying in the sky. Some times you want to die.
    You think that's better but then you think about others around you.
    How much they will miss you. Will someone tell you what to do to help you get threw.

    Why Does The World Feel like it's crashing in on you.
    How does one make it true and blue. Make your life shine like the stars.
    Will some one help you get threw. Please do.

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    danmartyjake1 commented on Why Does The World Feel

    01-13-2010

    I like the repeated lines, "Why does the world feel like it's crashing in on you" and the sadness of the tale rings nicely in rhythm. (Use through instead of threw.) Great material, great potential.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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