The Sun And The Moon Rises

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    The Sun And The Moon Rises

                                           
    The sun and moon rises up and then it sets.
    People rises there heads and then they lay
    down to rest. Life is a cycle that will repeat it
    self. Some will live for along time some will pass on.

    The sun and moon rises up and then it sets.
    Then you realize there is more then this. Life is a 
    cycle that will keep repeating its self. You go out and
    do things and make some memories. Then you relax yourself.

    The sun and moon rises up and then it sets.
    Then you realize life has alot to do and has regrets.
    So you try to make it work the best you can.
    Then you remember theres more to life then
    people understand. All you have to do is give love and
    a helping hand.

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    CMarsh commented on The Sun And The Moon Rises

    10-08-2009

    Left me wanting more Ladyinblack, but nicely done. If I may make a suggestion the flow was a little off for me but content was good.

    dannyboy22 commented on The Sun And The Moon Rises

    10-08-2009

    nice comparisons .. i like the meaningfulness of lives lessons.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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