Who Am I?

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  • Life
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  • Confusion

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    Who am I really? Or am I unknown?

    Who Am I?

     Who am I?
    I am me,
    Am I not?
    Or is that my simple shell,
    Does that ring a bell?,
    Is there a hidden soul inside me?,
    Is it possible to set it free?,
    Confusion all around,
    Will I ever be found?,
    Always, always running,
    Never very cunning,
    Lost inside myself,
    Searching for the real me,
    Making me scream and want to flee,
    Who am I?,
    That one question always remains  

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    Rhymer commented on Who Am I?

    04-08-2010

    Searching for who you are and what your are to become. Excellent write 10 from me.
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    britt commented on Who Am I?

    04-02-2010

    amazing sara para:D i loves it, your such a great writer, poetry buddies for life (:
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    sunset31

    04/02/2010

    Haha!(: thanks bicci nicci! PBFLzz! (poetry buddies for life) lmaoo(:

    trainpain commented on Who Am I?

    04-02-2010

    wow. you pretty much just put my feelings for the last year or so in simple words. you are a great writer keep on going. i believe that your writing can help people, understand and grasp what they are feeling! way to go!
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    sunset31

    04/02/2010

    Thanks so much! I guess I use my own life as inspiration for all of my poems. They seem to end up good most of the time.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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