Where Were You

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    • Mayuna
    • Anata wa Naraku no hana ja nai ~ You are not a flower of Hell

    Where Were You

     Where were you on that warm summers day
    That faithful day I felt my heart wither and decay
    Dark clouds gathered over head to hang over me
    Filling my soul with dread
    Cautiously tilting my head to the sky
    I heard distantly a ravens cry
    That was when it became all too clear
    You were never really ever there

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    gogant commented on Where Were You

    01-16-2010

    A longing for a love, comes a wisp of it, and then it floats gently off with the flowing of a breeze. This is a very nice piece of poetry Mayuna................................................................gogant
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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