Where were you?

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  • Jaimie
  • is sorry for not being on more. once i get settled in my new house i should have more time.

Where were you?

Where were you?
In my darkest hour.
When I needed you the most?

Where were you?
When I was in the pits of depression?
When I felt like I was drowning?

Where were you?
When I was crying myself to sleep?
When I need someone to
hold me and tell me
I would be ok?

Where were you?
When I needed someone
to tell me they loved me?
When I needed someone to help
put my heart back together?

Where were you?
Mom,
Where were you?

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hisyanna commented on Where were you?

06-30-2009

wow this was awesome...i love love love poems i can relate 2!

TheAngelOfDeath commented on Where were you?

06-30-2009

Wow and you said you sucked BULL SHIT@!! this a a great poem and the ending.. you can tell that this is a heart felt peace of poetry... 10 from me. :)

BDIsernhagen commented on Where were you?

06-30-2009

ouch. I can see you bleeding tears here, soaking yourself in a puddle of agony. Its a bit to personal, but proabbly because I cannot really relate. thank you for sharing!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Jaimie’s Poems (6)

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I just dont get it. 1
Before and After 1
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you and me 0
Where were you? 3
Love and Pain 0