Where have you been?

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    Where have you been?

    Where have you been?
    You told me you'd never leave me
    I sit here crying realize how much you've been lying
    You told me you loved me? That was a lie
    I'm sick of this I'm sick of you
    You cant keep breaking my heart in two
    I've given you more then once chance
    You always say it will be different
    There you go once again another lie
    Do you like seeing me cry?
    Im tired Im tired of crying
    My heart is tired of aching
    I think its time I walk away
    and never look back, just remember
    you'll be my greatest mistake

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    LadyL714 commented on Where have you been?

    03-01-2009

    This is a beautiful poem; however, you have several spelling, punctuation and grammatical errors. You did a good job getting your point across, though.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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