Love

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  • Lost Love

    Love
    I just want to be loved
    I'm tired of aching I'm tired of pain
    I'm tired of these little boys playing games
    I want to be held and never let go
    The scars on my body tell stories
    That im not quite ready to tell
    I fell down 7 times but got up 8
    Each scar represents a struggle, the pain
    Each one beautiful in there own certain way

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    FFXIweasel commented on Love

    05-20-2009

    in life few things are certain, those that are are called "Laws" and are unchangable. one of these laws is Newtons third law http://www.glenbrook.k12.il.us/gbssci/phys/Class/newtlaws/u2l4a.html just as love can have you walking the heaven's it can take you to the depths of hell. just have to get back on you're feet and try again. you're match is out there somplace and you will find him but you must keep looking to do so. took me 42 years to find my soul mate and things still are not per
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    arfin09 commented on Love

    02-28-2009

    very truthful content.the last 2 lines are good...ck spelling (in THEIR own certain way)
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    ozzydio18 commented on Love

    02-22-2009

    i gave you a 8 hope you get a chance to read mine
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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