When You Were W.| Her You Should Have Been W.| Me .
we were never meant to be, you will always see something in her that you dont se in me. everytime i see you with her i get a pain in my chest. i have always had feelings for you, but us not together i guess is for the best. all these feelings inside not yet expressed. you want somebody to settle down with, thats me. trust me with your feelings, i promise i wont treat them wrong. i can show you better than i can tell you guaranteed. she cheats on you and you take her back. you tell me you like me all the time, you lie so much it makes me rhyme. when i see you with her i feel like crying, but not to the point i feel like dying. i let this go on for way to long, but i wont let my feelings continue to be stepped on, these feelings so deep i want to tell but talk is cheap. i have waited for you to be mine, but you cant decide what you want make up your mind.When You Were W.| Her You Should Have Been W.| Me .
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VaZFynest commented on When You Were W.| Her You Should Have Been W.| Me .
06-08-2011
- great write......you put you feelings out there...seems like you wear your heart on your sleev...like me.......good job! kudos.....one of life's tests.........
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06/08/2011
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BrokenHeart2009 commented on When You Were W.| Her You Should Have Been W.| Me .
05-30-2011
- I like the reality of your words. The description of the situation, how you lay it out on the line. It is hard to write what you wrote, and I think you did it with style and meaning.
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06/01/2011
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Smileywebby commented on When You Were W.| Her You Should Have Been W.| Me .
05-29-2011
- Good poem, I liked it. keep it up. god bless u it shows pain for from someone
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05/29/2011
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