When it rains

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    When it rains

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    I only know this one simple thing.

    I only live with the shame.

    That I hides inside so far and deep.

    That I scream out loud when I’m asleep.

    When it rains inside my house so cold.

    When it dampens my mood all is known.

    The demon in me will strike with hate.

    Only because it feels no ache.



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    charles52 commented on When it rains

    12-27-2009

    Good build up. Great job of moving the poem forward. Thanks for sharing.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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