When I feel down
When I feel down I can count my friends to help take my pain away when I feel down I can away pray to be helped along the way when I feel down I make my self helped by helping some one else because I feel there pain and make it go away when I feel down I can watch a happy movie and it takes my pain away . If I think about all the good thinks I have done it will make the pain away the more I think of the good to come my way it will take the pain away so why not let go of all the pain because I have to make it all in one day can't do that because what will come out of tomorrow if I do it all today ... Christina wrote on 8-1-2009When I feel down
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redbloodink commented on When I feel down
01-30-2010
- doing good things does help carry us to the next day.... I think life is way more then this tho.... I thank God that He made it possible for so many things.... the good and bad........ red
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keithrberryjr commented on When I feel down
08-02-2009
- There is a good message behind the poem.It takes a few minutes to get because of the spelling and grammar mistakes but it is a good poem anyway.Great job.Work on your spelling and grammar and your poems will really be great.Keep up the good work
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