What does it take?

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    What does it take?

     Are you aware
    Of the one that sits and stalks us throughout our lives
    Have you ever seen god?
    What does it take to be a hero in this society?
    Do you have to be a perfect child?
    An authority figure?
    God?
    Are you a perfect child?

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    Evolivid commented on What does it take?

    07-09-2009

    what it takes ... the highlight of life is death when you see "pure life love" looking back at you it makes it easy to give up into the arms of the reflection. what does God look like .. he looks like loving kindness thats better then life ... can you understand the pure meaning of that? "Take my hand and I will show you God"
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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