what about me

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    what about me
    EVERY DAY OF MY LIFE IS CRAZY, I HAVE NO TIME TO BE LAZY.KIDS REQUIRING MY FULL ATTENTION, WHILE FOOD ON THE STOVE IS BURNING IN MY KITCHEN. MY WIFE SAYING ONE THING BUT MEANS ANOTHER, WHICH LEAVES ME FEELING LIKE A FOOL STANDING IN THE RAIN WITH NO UMBER LA. FAMILY DOG MAKING CHEW TOYS OUT OF MY SHOES, THE HOUSE IS A MESS SO THE DOG IS LIKE WHAT HECK WITH THE RULES. AFTER THE WHOLE DAY IS OVER AND I DONE EVERY THING ASKED OF ME, I SIT DOWN FOR A SECOND AND ASK MYSELF, WHAT ABOUT ME.

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    onehit commented on what about me

    10-02-2009

    i come from a huge family and sometime everyone is busy with everyone else but me..so yeah, one tends to ask these questions..whats real though is how you as a person handles it all..i relate with your words, indeed! keep it up..
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    poett commented on what about me

    04-27-2009

    ha ha ha sorry for laughing but it seems funny to read this. I see you were all stressed and confused and annoyed not knowing what to do but just think back.... us women go through all that every day and sometimes we feel unappreciated by men like you. I love my husband but I do get over whelmed sometimes and also say what about me and that's when the witch takes revenge and gets after him this way too. You just got a taste of your own medicine anyways good job writing this. you should go over i
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    poett commented on what about me

    04-27-2009

    ha ha ha sorry for laughing but it seems funny to read this. I see you were all stressed and confused and annoyed not knowing what to do but just think back.... us women go through all that every day and sometimes we feel unappreciated by men like you. I love my husband but I do get over whelmed sometimes and also say what about me and that's when the witch takes revenge and gets after him this way too. You just got a taste of your own medicine anyways good job writing this. you should go over i
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    ccslim commented on what about me

    03-23-2009

    Hehehe I love this beside a few errors and content is so true! If you beat this out some more it may go far!
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    arfin09 commented on what about me

    02-28-2009

    yeah, man, all(?) us guys have done that duty and it can really suck! lucky for you that you're strong and can take it, right? yeah, right. keep writin' (but take the caps lock off, please)
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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