Wedding

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    Wedding
    Your voice, your smile, the way your eyes make me melt. You take my breath away with just one glance. You provided me with feelings I didn't know could be felt. Could this be true romance? The love that you show can only be described as a pre-wedding glow. The "I do's" are said, the crowd does cheer. But suddenly, I'm feeling fear. What's going on? What's happening here? Suddenly I hear. "Wake up dear. You had a dream. Hurry to school before the bell rings."

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    painz commented on Wedding

    03-09-2009

    Great twist sad it was not true though
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    bandit1192 commented on Wedding

    02-23-2009

    Good job. Nice twist at the end. TS
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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