Drifting

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    Drifting

    Just like the waves of the sea carrying an unsuspecting boat out into danger, I feel I am slipping into a coma carrying me uncousciously away from all I love. Can they tell? Can I? All the signs were there, but I ignored the warning signs set before me. I'm on a rollar coaster that I can't stop till the end. Some say it's a phase, I say it is something that needs to be stopped. I need to stop the wild ride and be rescued from the top just before the brink of disaster. I need someone to take me away to our own little world, where I can live in peace.

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    bandit1192 commented on Drifting

    02-23-2009

    Some times the answer comes from within. You seem to be working it out on paper. Keep working at it and I'm sure you'll find what you're looking for. Good Luck TS

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