Watching

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    Watching

    I sit by an watch
    watching for signs
    signs that show she still cares
    signs that she might want me back someday
    but i sit by an watch with no availe
    an ask myself will she ever keep her word
    will she ever come back to me
    like she said she would long ago
    but i sit by an  watch in guy come an go
    as i wonder will she ever come bak to me
    will she ever give me another try
    who knows maybe she will maybe she wont
    an so i will sit by
    waiting for her to be mine once more 

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    knight4696 commented on Watching

    11-30-2009

    Nice job Ironman! The longing and emotions are very tangible. Keep up the good work.

    sk8ergirl commented on Watching

    11-16-2009

    great poem lots of emotion a lot of feeling went into this poem great write.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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