past present future

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    past present future

    You have a past
    a past I do not know
    A past that has made you,
    the person i care so much for.

    We are the present
    a present that tells us,
    who we are today.

    We both have a future
    a future that holds many surprises
    A future with memories to be made,
    and memories to be forgotten.

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    knight4696 commented on past present future

    11-30-2009

    Ironman - This is a very nice poem. Both the emotiona nd flow are superb - A really nice job!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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