Vows

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Love

    Vows

    I stand here today before God, our family, and our friends professing my love for you.

    As a girl everyone has their dream guy, but seldom ever find the man they dream about. I believe that I am one of the blessed ones who has found the man I always knew I would spend the rest of my life with.

    Everyone has their opinion of what a relationship should be, but no two relationships are ever really the same. I was never really sure what a real relationship should be until I met you. You have shown me what a real love should feel like, you have uplifted my spirit and love me with all of my flaws.

    Looking into your eyes, I see a man who loves and cares for me the way no else can. Thinking of our future together I feel excited and have no hesitation about building our lives together and becoming one.

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    bforibus commented on Vows

    01-25-2009

    i loved it. its everything i would want a woman to vow to me, but as a poem i wish these beautiful colors song more to me. very good write

    dave005 commented on Vows

    01-25-2009

    to me a GOOD poem should invoke an emotion from the reader, and this poem does that. Very well written

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

    Unknown Source

    mrsroc3’s Poems (6)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    final wedding vows 3
    Just walk with me 3
    Vows 2
    Picture Perfect Child 1
    Mirrors do not lie 4
    Bonded Love 4