Visiting Day

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    Visiting Day

    Cleaned,showered,and dressed in my blues
    I waited for this day,I even got new shoes
    Finally it comes,the time of the call
    So nervous and weak,I hope I don't fall
    I make my way to the house on the hill
    So filled with expectation,down my spine ran a chill
    Then to a room to be stripped and searched
    Then around the corner to see my mom perched
    My heart fluttered and my stomach got tight
    Because around my mom there was nothing but light
    I turned,I saw,and flew from my chair
    I embraced my mom without despair
    Then rambled and talked all about my year
    As I reached up to my face to wipe a tear
    Always positive,I tried to be
    Hiding my pain from her to see
    The guard yelled out"Get back to your house"
    Our eyes met in silence as quiet as a mouse
    Then mom said" You'll be fine and so will I"
    Now I better go before I cry.

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    Tempestlady commented on Visiting Day

    07-29-2009

    Very real, very heartfelt, such happiness, and yet such despair. The price we have to pay, isn't always fair. Write on....

    rollerderby commented on Visiting Day

    12-06-2008

    wonderful poem my dear,though the overall meesage of the poem is somewhat sad. There was a peak of love and happiness. The poem had a nice meter and rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing it with us.

    Phoenix9 commented on Visiting Day

    12-01-2008

    very well written

    bobzoom commented on Visiting Day

    11-12-2008

    tis type of poem i dont like to write too upseting to me but i do like to read good poem dear

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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