Vididness

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    Vididness

    With open eyes and an open heart
    I submit my life into the melting pot
    Forever waiting for the truth to be told
    forever wondering what life may hold
    not wanting to cry but it begin to poor
    like a rain storm flooding the rivers moore
    Happiness is miles away without recorse
    and love is lost like a poor mans purse
    so to you I say just run away and give up this life in any way
    as i beg of you to kneel right down and hope to wear this mighty crwon
    only to wish I could carry this burden as my legs are weak and my heart is burning
    so ashamed to carry this crown as my face is torn up with a scowlest frown

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    Gertrude commented on Vididness

    06-02-2009

    This is a very good writing. It's deep and it touches me. Keep writing. I look forward to reading more.

    4everboom commented on Vididness

    05-27-2009

    this is very good, lost like a poor mans purse. this is very good indeed I hope you enjoy what I have to say. great job.

    mistyparish commented on Vididness

    05-27-2009

    ................... This is deep and I really like it a lot...............

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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