Unkonwn

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Unkonwn

To see through eyes like glass
with no remorse of my past
Longing for that touch
but only to be forgotten by so much
as a dream I can fly so free
but in life my feet hold them be
not understanding the facts of life
like a blind man begging for spare change
unlike all who see through these eyes of glass
with a black mind and a mask
true life is within the beholder
only to be shunned on thy shoulder
No more tears should be wasted today
as the light will touch and show the way

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anneliseh commented on Unkonwn

06-02-2009

this is a great poem. "to see through eyes like glass" very nice line. the rhyming really works too.

ladypoet commented on Unkonwn

05-27-2009

This poem ends inspirational. i love the way you started it out. Much love to you James... -Lady P.

Brittany024 commented on Unkonwn

05-27-2009

i really like this poem, has emotion, and i can feel how you felt... really good write... mad props

Zionking commented on Unkonwn

05-27-2009

if i read you poem it make me think about my life . how it put great way . wow you teach me

mistyparish commented on Unkonwn

05-27-2009

WOW, "No more tears should be wasted today as the light will touch and show the way", that is a great line. Makes me think of my mom. Great write!!!!

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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