unnoticed

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    stellar commented on unnoticed

    12-11-2009

    Very interesting and original lol...You really got sense of humor

    mamasan commented on unnoticed

    11-15-2009

    Interested in the mode of rhyme you leave me to read; but then there are five fingers on my hand and none the same. lol I see you have a sense of humor and may I say to you that is necessary in life. Meantime to be unnoticed means your noticed..

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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