The See-saw

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    The See-saw

     Yellow and green...
    green and yellow..

    the grass is dancing with the breeze of cold december...
    then it stopped..
    it stopped...

    and it started dancing again...

    the heavens cried and thunder aired.

    the metals started eeking.. and one side went lower..

    the other one higher...

    and it all continued... to go lower and higher...


    when all became clear,


    she was no longer there.  

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    ayyan commented on The See-saw

    12-09-2011

    very good writing and happy about the nature of the grass dancing breeze of cold december that is chill and enjoyable in mind too
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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