TWO BAD NIGHTS

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It pays to be kind and mean
It works better when you let love go
It is best if you scream at broken hearts
Little is what i mean
Read it in the opposite.
June,6th,2009

TWO BAD NIGHTS

Sadly I write
towards the heart i just lost
it's my fault
it's your fault
whoever did it wrong  makes no sense
We were suppose to be together
We were suppose to make it count
I was lost i agree
you looked for but i won't come back
now,i face this dark street alone
with just my pen and paper.


First,the night is suppose to be yours not mine
am i right or wrong?
Second,the night is meant to be ours
am i right or wrong?
I made a mess with my mood
I made a mess with my silence
Lost in thoughts of another
How sad my lonely days as just begun
you caught red-handed
when you look inside i was not there
While i  was thinking of  undying love
I was loosing my cherry heart
when you made me see what i see now
I saw I had lost a longing love...tell me,is it wrong?To be beautyful?
is it a crime to let your weakness show?Or naturally beautys are meant to be strong and unbreakable?

Am bad, right?
I spoilt two nights for you
I gave you two bad nights!
am just sorry

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