LIFE"S JOURNEY

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THey say love is blind

but what makes it  blind is the 'foolishness of the mind'

The blindness of love is in Tolerance

overlooking wrong yet seeing it.BRLY,april 200,

 

LIFE"S JOURNEY

Who would go with me
In my life's journey?
Who would be my companion
In my daily strugglles?
who is ready to risk it all 
for journey mercies?
Who can stand as truth 
In life's daily stresses?
Nobody is ready to serve anybody
None is eager to save anyone
None will catch your fall
None but you savior
Do you have a savior
In your life's journey?
Is your savior weak or strong?
How long can your savior withstand struuggle?
Is your savior really a savior?
Proudly I walk through 
when hurts and doubts wants to derail me
My savior stands by
whispering gentle right words to my soul,
maybe, you need someone to lean on
when tears seems inevitable
Someone strong enough 
Who won't sleep when you do
who would be your world when yours world is gone
Someone who would kiss you back to reality 
If you do not have one 
Am nice,I would share mine with you
He does not mind you too
Check me out 
am not carrying pride 
But I have someone who makes me proud
In my life's journey
Am sure HE IS there
and everywhere
Am sure HE WOULD hear.

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BDIsernhagen commented on LIFE"S JOURNEY

06-03-2009

HE is there, always. thank you for posting this poem, I enjoyed it and will be looking forward to reading more of your work.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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