Treasure for Life

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  • Friendship
    • cloudburst
    • I have learned that, life is tough, but I am tougher....

    Treasure for Life

    These small gestures that hold us tight,

    As if seeing the world from your eyes,

    You’re always felt like a treasure for life.

    Not a friend, but a need of mine.

     

    Is it a coincidence or a mystery?

    That some one appears from your past,

    Perfect manners, etiquettes and so sober,

    Yet so humble, as if goddess of life

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    icu2 commented on Treasure for Life

    01-14-2010

    Okay, here I go again picking your beautiful poem appart. Line four: Why not say..."Not ONLY a friend but a need of mine. Truthfully? I wish my love could write half as good as you do.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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