BY YOUR SIDE

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  • cloudburst
  • I have learned that, life is tough, but I am tougher....

BY YOUR SIDE

Now you must be in your deep sleep,,

Face like a baby, fresh as ever, away from the tough realities of life.

Night birds are getting ready to leave your park.

They did the job while looking at your window, singing last song.

 

It’s about to break dawn, westerly winds bellowing little fast,

Should have fought there way, to enter in your bed room,

To touch your face; to kiss your head.

A bird must have opened its eyes to witness the first sign of light.

 

As you lay awake in warmness of your blanket,

Slowly opening your eyes adjusting to the morning light,

Stretching your arm, out in the sky,

Tree that stood for so long, must have witnessed, same sign of life.

 

I stand awake to see all this happening.

Imagining the beauty of all time,

Thinking, feeling, loving you, by your side,

All, but so little of you, I want to fill my life.

 

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Necy commented on BY YOUR SIDE

07-09-2009

Mr. Cloudburst, you have same poem tag as mine; " In My Solitude"yes, sometimes we need to think at the strange sight, realizing how distant those times seemed to be now. Faced up with reality; harsh as it is; that we cannot grasp sometimes. Kudos to your work of mind!

cloudburst

07/09/2009

thank you necy

PunkCutie commented on BY YOUR SIDE

07-04-2009

this is beautiful, very touching, i truly liked this,very deep, and wonderful analogies, this was very well written also.great job, keep it up!

PRober commented on BY YOUR SIDE

06-28-2009

very touching...emotionally written, great analogies as to the point you're making. Keep writing!

cloudburst

06/28/2009

thank you Prober for your grasious comments.. why can't I talk to you on chat, "u rate me I rate U" hopefully I am pressing the right buttons..LOL

cloudburst

06/28/2009

thank you Prober for your grasious comments.. why can't I talk to you on chat, "u rate me I rate U" hopefully I am pressing the right buttons..LOL

TamiG76 commented on BY YOUR SIDE

05-22-2009

Wow. This is AMAZING!!!!!!!!! It is deep and profound and stunningly beautiful. There just isn't enough good words that I can say about this. I think it's my favorite so far.

cloudburst

06/29/2009

Oh… my dear friend,, how can I go so lucky to have such thoughtful comments to my just ordinary thoughts.. and how unlucky, not to see all these for such a long period of time. Mainly due to my extra commitments that always force me away from my friends and love…. (for poetry). Thank you Tami for honoring me with those beautiful words, this will help to get some inspiration… with profound gratitude and wishing you happiness and health… Zia

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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