Transcendental Experience

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Transcendental Experience

                      Transcendental Experience

       It's almost dawn and the first light starts appearing with the dawn' chorus.
       My wind was in such a whirl that I could hardly calm my thoughts.
       I have cried and felt I couldn't take the bitter end of life anymore;        can't hold back the pain, the tears; the irreplaceable memories.           
       I have moved myself at the roofless veranda    
          and in a reclining seat, aimlessly stared into the distance space of the skies, of the vast horizon; lost in thought and lost in touch to the world.
       When suddenly appeared a huge formation of white pigeons flying altogether moving about freely.
        They looked like cherub angelic plump children with wings.

       For a moment I was stunned by the enormous beauty in the skies, I thought I was in Heaven! Their particular arrangement was really a pleasant and most impressive sight that could be kept and behold between the pages of our mind.

       The distinctive atmosphere that seemed to surround has changed the aura about me. God's way of showing His Infinite Supreme Greatness ! Yes, we can be transcendental sometimes, going beyond the limits of human knowledge.   

                                   Necy 
        

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redbloodink commented on Transcendental Experience

12-21-2009

awesome write......... ' For a moment I was stunned by the enormous beauty in the skies, I thought I was in Heaven!" this line is so true.... the best thing is............ If we study Gods word to find ourselves appoved He can and will show us the best thing in the world as He has shown me... We are already in heaven as you said... We are a vapor in time which can be a second or years or what ever He has for us... Now isn't that beautiful.... Powerful write and a well deserved 10 from me... red

bforibus commented on Transcendental Experience

10-22-2009

i greatly visual and profound story. almost if not spiritural. great job on this story

rougepriest commented on Transcendental Experience

09-04-2009

Very impressive imagery that allowed me see what you saw there like a frozen space in a timeless memory who`s recall is but a thought away. Greatness explained in a great way!

rasputin commented on Transcendental Experience

08-12-2009

good job necy.... u are amazing poet...... keep writing such great words

Rahul commented on Transcendental Experience

08-06-2009

the beauty of nature so nicely portrayed. the vividness is there. a kind of supra emotional flow is witnessed. very nice and worth reading. pleasurable

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

Necy’s Poems (9)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Morning Bliss on Beautiful Spring Days ( Lord I Love You ) 2
Lamentations 7
Canticle to a Lost Love ( locus classicus ) 12
Transcendenta
l Experience
10
Memory 8
Lessons of Love 8
In My Solitude 18
True Love 11
My Eternal Love 7