today and tonight

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    today and tonight

    today I tell you I love you
    but
    do you love me too
    tomorrow we make love
    but tonight we fight
    like cats and dogs
    maybe we can make up
    but who knows we can
    brake up
    before the night is over
    so for now
    lets make love
    till we can't say a word
    and end up clueless

    Maria Bonet

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    rollerderby commented on today and tonight

    08-22-2009

    I hope everything worked out for you in this relationship, if it doesn't dont worry you're still young and attractivw. Well done dear!

    wildpendigus commented on today and tonight

    06-03-2009

    I like this poem could be a very nice song with right funky beat and rythmn section, and drums, altough it is just a plain nice poem I would take it a step farther it may become a hit song Congratulations ! grecowong@yahoo.com

    maria01031

    08/16/2009

    thats what i wanted it to be but thank you

    shirineshat commented on today and tonight

    04-25-2009

    to be honest with you some guys are users they use girl 4 what they want (sex) and they call it love.love and sex are two different things. Becare who u choose because thats how US girls get hurt faster than guys. We think of love, they think about sex.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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