To the One I Love

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    To the One I Love
    I'm so crazy about you
    All these feelings are new
    I love everything about you
    I love everything you do
    I want to take you by the hand
    And try to make you understand
    Just try to make you see
    How much you mean to me
    Words can't express my love
    I swear you're sent from above
    I love you in every single way
    I thank God every waking day
    He sent me someone wonderful
    Noone could be more beautiful
    You're the only one I miss
    How I long for your sweet kiss


    Written: Jan. 2, 2003

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    AlexanderCory commented on To the One I Love

    09-18-2009

    I do really enjoy this poem. It tells exactly how you feel about you significant other, and when I read this I can't help but feeling a huge sudden burst of love for my girl. Thank you. The last line "Please do" I think should be taken out, or the last couple lines should be reworded or something. Other than that though fantastic.
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    Chelles

    09/20/2009

    I deleted the ending. I wrote this a long time ago. Lol thank you for your honest opinion tho.

    Chrisjan commented on To the One I Love

    06-17-2009

    A very well written poem. Awesome start, all the way to the end. ....Send me away from everyone but you please do... I got lost. But the rest of your poem was from your heart + soul flowing from within thee.Keep an open relationship. Thank you for sharing. Great baby photos, very beautiful.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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