to cut and tear skin

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to cut and tear skin

I see you cut and tear skin,
for what though, the love of a life time or death of a kin?
Anything less than that is foolish and unwise.
If you think about it at all you would realize.
How would you feel if the ones you loved cut and tore up their skin
because of what you have done too them,
You'll see life is to presious to cut and tear skin
for the life and will to go on are far greater from with in.

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Tray4 commented on to cut and tear skin

04-28-2009

for what though, the love of a life time or death of a kin? Anything less than that is foolish and unwise, I don't quite get this or what you mean by it. Are you saying that it is only worth it for those reasons . If so thats not true it's not worth it for those reasons either.

kweenofcnfusion commented on to cut and tear skin

04-23-2009

I like it...but maybe spell check it to help make it more potent. Otherwise very good.

kutielisa commented on to cut and tear skin

04-22-2009

i love your writing keep it =)

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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