Time Stood Still

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Time Stood Still

Just like that time stood still

Amethyst petals, gracefully dancing

Golden strands reaching for their turn

Your laughter a sweet concerto to my ears

Innocence twirling through the petals

Entranced

Vivid shades of crimson in your dress

Hope glimmering in your eyes

I dare time to begin once more.

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LeonPride commented on Time Stood Still

03-25-2013

A very grand capturing moment of time. This was very nicely done!

lisaner commented on Time Stood Still

09-26-2012

Lovely portrayal of a moment so beautiful it should be frozen in time. Good write!

cttgad

09/26/2012

thank you lisaner :)

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